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اخي وعزيزي (( مفتاح الشعر )) سويلم مناحي
اشكر شخصك الكريم على تخصيصي بشعرك الراقي
وذلك بإسناد قصيدتك الطيبه المنشوره بهذا المنتدى لي
وهذا شيء اتشرف به من شاعر كبير بحجمك.
وأشكر كل من:
شيخ الشعر .. الشاعر/ محمد سلمان الوهيداني
والمبدع المتألق .. الشاعر/ مسند العويمري
على مجاراتهم الرائعه لقصيدتك.

وأنا من هنا ونيابة عن محمد سلمان .. والجمهور .. اهدي لك هذا الرد
واتمنى ان يحوز على رضاك واستحسانك انت وجميع الأخوان القراء الأعزاء.

هلا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          مرحبا                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          بالشاعر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          الي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           برز                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           له                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           دوروكفوف                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       المراجل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        تعشق                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        مصافحة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        كفه

هلا                                                                                                                                                                                                       ياسويلم                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        وانت                                                                                                                                                                                                        شاعر                                                                                                                                                                                                        علم                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        مشهوروترثة                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ارجال(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       تطحن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        الموت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        وتسفه

ياراع                                                                                                                                                                                                       القصيد                                                                                                                                                                                                       ..                                                                                                                                                                                                       الي                                                                                                                                                                                                        على                                                                                                                                                                                                        المنتدى                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        منشورعياناً                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         بياناً                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          والجماهير                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          مصطفه

قصيد(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        يشرفني                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        كما                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        اللولو                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        المنثورعلى                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         شاطي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          الإبداع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          موج                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          البحر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          زفه

قصيد(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                      جزل                                                                                                                                                                                                      ..                                                                                                                                                                                                       صفق                                                                                                                                                                                                       له                                                                                                                                                                                                       المعجب                                                                                                                                                                                                       ..                                                                                                                                                                                                       المسحوربسحر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          البيان                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          الي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          منه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          مالت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           الكفه

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حضر                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        ينقل                                                                                                                                                                                                        الجثه                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        الى                                                                                                                                                                                                        قبرها                                                                                                                                                                                                        المحفورعليها                                                                                                                                                                                                        كفن                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        لكن                                                                                                                                                                                                        رفض                                                                                                                                                                                                        يكشف                                                                                                                                                                                                         اللفه                                                                                                                                                                                                         !

ولكن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ياابو                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         خالد                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          مادام                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          الغطاء                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          مستورياثقل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         البلاوي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         نوب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         واحيان                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ياخفه

راع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          المشلح                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          الي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          تحتها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ثوبه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          المزورعلامه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          يبدل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ثوب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          الاصيل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          بالدفه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ؟

وعلامه                                                                                                                                                                              يروح                                                                                                                                                                               الـ                                                                                                                                                                               ..                                                                                                                                                                               حج                                                                                                                                                                               لكن                                                                                                                                                                               ماهو                                                                                                                                                                               مبرور                                                                                                                                                                               ؟تعب                                                                                                                                                                                                        له                                                                                                                                                                                                        تعب                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        لكن                                                                                                                                                                                                        رجع                                                                                                                                                                                                         ماوصل                                                                                                                                                                                                         شفه

ونصب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        له                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         خيام                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         وشب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         بالوادي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         الممطوروعمل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         بهرجه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          والناس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          تنخاه                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          وتدفه

عموماً                                                                                                                                                                                                       ..                                                                                                                                                                                                       ابشرح                                                                                                                                                                                                        لك                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        وابعطيك                                                                                                                                                                                                        مني                                                                                                                                                                                                        شوراليا                                                                                                                                                                                                       جاك                                                                                                                                                                                                        علم(ن)                                                                                                                                                                                                        عن                                                                                                                                                                                                        هل                                                                                                                                                                                                        الشارقه                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        خفه

ومادام                                                                                                                                                                                                       البلاء                                                                                                                                                                                                       الي                                                                                                                                                                                                       جاك                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        صابك                                                                                                                                                                                                        من                                                                                                                                                                                                        الدكتورعليك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         الصبر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          لاجتك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          عوجاء                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          وملتفه

وعسى                                                                                                                                                                                                      الله                                                                                                                                                                                                      يعين                                                                                                                                                                                                      الخاطر                                                                                                                                                                                                       ..                                                                                                                                                                                                       الساكت                                                                                                                                                                                                       ..                                                                                                                                                                                                       المكسوردفعها                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        دفعها                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                        لين                                                                                                                                                                                                        صارت                                                                                                                                                                                                        على                                                                                                                                                                                                         الحفه

وتعيش                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       المعاني                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        وسطها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        سرها                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        المقبوروتطيب                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         النفوس                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         الي                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         عن                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          الشر                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          منكفه

وسلامك                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       وصل                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ..                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        ياذايع                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        الصيت                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        للجمهوروالى                                                                                                                                                                              ..                                                                                                                                                                              محمد                                                                                                                                                                              السلمان                                                                                                                                                                              ..                                                                                                                                                                              في                                                                                                                                                                               ..                                                                                                                                                                               منتدى                                                                                                                                                                               الكفه

وسلامتك ياابو خالد .. انت وجميع القراء الأعـــزاء .. في هذا الموقع الراقي الشامخ.
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[البعيد الهادي]

وصح اللسانك وبيض الله
وجهك
على هذه القصيده الجزله ومن شاعر جزل
وبارك الله باالجميع
ودمت بخير وصحه

[سند الرشيدي]

وصح اللسانك وبيض الله
وجهك
على هذه القصيده الجزله ومن شاعر جزل
وبارك الله باالجميع
ودمت بخير وصحه

[علي سعود]

عموماً .. ابشرح لك .. وابعطيك منـي شـور

اليا جاك علم(ن) عن هـل الشارقـه .. خفـه

شور طيب من طيب

صح السانك صح السانك أبدعت

لك أرق التحايا

[مسندالعويمري]

عبدالله المظهور صح السانك وافي بشعرك وبحضورك بيض الله وجهك

ويشرفني يكون لي بصمه لو بشي قليل مع شعرا لهم مجال كبير بشعر

[سويلم مناحي]

ابو محمد لااحب ان اطيل الكلام ولكن اقولك
اولاً / اهني نفسي على اختياري لشخصك الكريم
ثانيا/ اقولك انك اصبت الهدف ميه بالميه وبيض الله وجهك
ثالثا/ صح لسانك ملايين مع علمي بانها لاتكفي

وفقك الله

وتحياتي لك

[عبدالله المظهور]

اقتباس من مشاركة البعيد الهادي وصح اللسانك وبيض الله وجهك على هذه القصيده الجزله ومن شاعر جزل وبارك الله باالجميع ودمت بخير وصحه

صح بدنك
وتشرفت بكونك اول من يقرأ قصيدتي

لك الشكر والتقدير والاحترام

[ذيبان الرشيدي]

دعني
بدايةٍ أتأمل جمال ماسطرته من حرووف
لا والله
بل دُرر
انبهرت
من جمال حبكها وسبكها

ثانياً
صُح بَوحُك أيها العذب
وخالقي وبحق
أنت
فعلاً شاعر الكفه
وتستحق ماوصلت إليه

شخصية
متميزه ومتفرده ...
وشاعرية ..
عن الاستنساخ متجرده

مُبدع مُبدع أقولها للألف

ثالثاً
دعني أثمل قليلٍ على سكرةِ حرفك ونزفك

سجلني
متابع وبشبق لكُل ما تكتُب
أيها
الشهم النبيل

سلمت وسلم بوحك

ودمت
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